Today I used my iPhone throughout the day to see what the scores of the football matches and also went to crystal palace Sunderland and got autographs and photos with my iPhone
This is OK Jake, but it's nowhere near detailed enough, describe how you used each form of media and your thoughts on it too. You should think about adding some video or photo content to illustrate what you're talking about.
This is OK Jake, but it's nowhere near detailed enough, describe how you used each form of media and your thoughts on it too. You should think about adding some video or photo content to illustrate what you're talking about.
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